Advetisements

Recently Room Ten were making an advertisement for an object that Mr Barnett gave us. We did this because we have been creating persuasive writing in class.

First we had to write a plan that all of our group members had to join in on. Next we wrote our script. It had to have some emotive language in. We had to show Mr Barnett our script before we went to record. We could record anywhere in the school, except for in the other classrooms. We had to make the viewers want to buy our product.

When we had finished and were ready to present to the class Mr Barnett gave each group a group to give feedback to. The group had to write down a group glow and a group grow. A group glow means what they did really good and the group grow means what they could work on.

That was how we made our advertisement. Room Ten had a lot of fun!

By Kiah

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Strike!

                                         Strike!!!

Bang Clash, Bang Clash.

It was nerve racking, just waiting to see what Strike meant. The whole school was waiting. How long to go? EKKKK!!!!!!!!  
10:00-12:00-1:30-YESSSS it is finally 2:00! Room 10 was lining up to scoot to the hall. Girl line boy line, lets go. We were off, just a couple more minutes. On our way we passed classes just as excited.
Everyone was pilling into the hall. Ummmmm... Drums and more drums. We didn't know what was coming. Until... BANG CLASH, BANG CLASH. Woo noise, now this is what strike meant, a drum performance. It's great!

There were two men and a woman.  Their names were Katie (Special K), Murray (Muzza) and James (Jimbo the flying Nimbo). They did a lot of acts. My favorite act was the fire one. They used this spray and it made the fire go crazy.

There was this one act when Mr Barnett had to do a speed challenge and he had to compete against Mrs McKenzie. They also got nick names... Mr Barnett (Super Man) and Mrs McKenzie (Wonder Woman).
The last act was amazing. It was loud and had a lot of detail. They switched drums to make it interesting. 'Bang', 'Clash', 'Ting'. That was a great show. I hope they come again soon.

By Gabby